A great article on things that many of us do wrong with our writing, and some very good advice on how to easily fix the mistakes. I look forward to/dread finding out how often I’ve made these mistakes in my current book.
Filter words and crutch words are a more recent discovery of mine with writing. Learning what they are, why they’re bad, and how to get rid of them has really changed my style for the better.
Distancing words are things like: felt, heard, saw, touched, looked, etc. They put a barrier between the reader and the book, rather than immersing them right into the action or description.
For example this sentence: She looked up to see dark clouds in the sky and heard the distant rumble of thunder. She felt a chill run down her spine.
Can become: Dark clouds rolled across the sky and thunder rumbled in the distance. A chill ran down her spine.
Fewer words and more powerful and immersive, right?
Crutch words are slightly different. They are words we use too often, and pause a sentence unnecessarily. They are fine for speech, but…
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